the key jingles in the lock. the steady footfalls of a tired man. i can imagine him placing his briefcase by the door while hanging his coat and hat. he breathes deep the nourishing aroma of a healthy home made meal. he takes comfort knowing i will emerge from the kitchen bearing an ice cold martini, place it in his hands, lead him to his recliner, and ease him into his domesticated throne.
dry martini in hand, i smooth my hair, retie my apron, glance around my newly painted avocado kitchen and head out into the living room.
i halt in the foyer, eyes locked with a blonde, her arm hooked over the elbow of a handsome pinstripe suit, my husband. her tinkling laugh an assault on the pristine serenity of tangerine and butter yellow wallpaper. slowly lowering the martini, small steps taking me closer to the offensive blonde, my husbands startled eyes meet mine. the blonde titters as i grip her arm and lead her out the door.
he looks at me defiantly. he redistributes his weight, anxiously, like a child awaiting punishment. “i’m a man. it’s 1968, i think i should be able to do what i please, i’m a man…”
“with all due respect henry, just when did i say you could think?” i place my hand on his arm and guide him to his recliner. “now, why don’t i go make you a fresh martini?”
“yes dear.” he whispers to my already retreating figure.
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March 22nd, 2005 - 4:35 pm
Very nice. Moms (and wives) circa 1968. Gotta love em. Yeah, sometimes they were right. Mother Knows Best.
Have women actually lost some of the power they had back when lines were clearly drawn in black and white?
March 22nd, 2005 - 4:36 pm
….black and white and avocado green?
March 22nd, 2005 - 4:48 pm
i don’t know if we ever lost that power, it’s just different now. but what i wouldn’t give for an avocado kitchen and tangerine wallpaper…oooh and house dresses with aprons!
March 22nd, 2005 - 5:27 pm
Somehow I imagine the modern version of this story to be the wife walking in with a younger man on her arm.
Women haven’t lost power, perhaps, they’ve just redistributed it.
March 22nd, 2005 - 7:35 pm
i was thinking of writing something else for this too, just for fun. maybe in regard to our feminine wiles…
March 22nd, 2005 - 11:30 pm
I especially liked this description: tangerine and butter yellow wallpaper.
Why haven’t I been to your blog before? More’s the pity!
I’ll be back.
March 24th, 2005 - 5:40 pm
That’s great! I could see this scene so clearly in my head. Wow.